Commentary Reflection

Strengths:

• My writing flows smoothly between ideas such as the transitions used to go into the next paragraph.
• There are very few errors grammatically or  of spelling.
• The structure and organization of my writing is well presented which contributed to the smooth flow of the ideas.

Areas of Improvement:

•  The analyzing of the songs message has to be greatly improved due to most of it not making sense when related back to the tone. Many of the supporting lines from the song had to be analyzed better and had  to have more depth relating back to the main idea of each paragraph.